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 Post subject: Input please. Wicked Pumpkin Eater of Children
New postPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:27 am 

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Hah! Mebbe not Eater of Children but he sure makes me think he would.
I have plans to have several more tendrils climbing up the torso and sweets and treats just out of reach and maybe a companion or two - little kids dressed up for trick or treat or something. Is that over the top? Should I just leave something to the imagination?
Let me know what you think, don't hold back. Proportions?
This was based on a cheap, knockoff vinyl piece as I didn't have any Munnys on hand.

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 Post subject: Re: Input please. Wicked Pumpkin Eater of Children
New postPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 8:28 am 
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I think it looks awesome. I think a small crow or two on the limbs would really complete the piece.

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 Post subject: Re: Input please. Wicked Pumpkin Eater of Children
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hypnotiq wrote:
I think it looks awesome. I think a small crow or two on the limbs would really complete the piece.

Danke, oooh yes! That's a great idea!


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 Post subject: Re: Input please. Wicked Pumpkin Eater of Children
New postPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:12 pm 
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I really like this piece. The sculpting is really well done. Maybe a few more roots coming off the bottom. The top as it is now a little heavy to me. Could balance it out, plus if the bottom had more structure, there could be enough weight on the bottom to sculpt a little boy hanging by a leg from one of his arms? haha. Or not... lol

Really like where you are going with this! He is really well done. The head is so cool! Can't wait to see where you go with this!

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 Post subject: Re: Input please. Wicked Pumpkin Eater of Children
New postPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:55 pm 
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I think you should definitely include some snacks (children) probably near the roots like fuller suggested. The sculpting looks pretty amazing. The ideas awesome but I must admit I am a sucker for anything with a pumpkin for a head. Am I mistaken or is the base one of those Michael's Halloween DIY figures?

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 Post subject: Re: Input please. Wicked Pumpkin Eater of Children
New postPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 4:53 pm 

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Fuller wrote:
I really like this piece. The sculpting is really well done. Maybe a few more roots coming off the bottom. The top as it is now a little heavy to me. Could balance it out, plus if the bottom had more structure, there could be enough weight on the bottom to sculpt a little boy hanging by a leg from one of his arms? haha. Or not... lol

Really like where you are going with this! He is really well done. The head is so cool! Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Wow, thanks so much Fuller. I agree, he is a bit top heavy. Hoping to add 'toes' (root-like appendages)
LOVE the idea of the kid hanging (screaming?) lol by his leg...awesome. I was thinking about maybe using Dunnys or Bots for kids...sort of standing there staring in shock...something like that.


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 Post subject: Re: Input please. Wicked Pumpkin Eater of Children
New postPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 4:56 pm 

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Nonegious wrote:
I think you should definitely include some snacks (children) probably near the roots like fuller suggested. The sculpting looks pretty amazing. The ideas awesome but I must admit I am a sucker for anything with a pumpkin for a head. Am I mistaken or is the base one of those Michael's Halloween DIY figures?

Heh, yep snacks LOL! Thank you, I am a sucker for pumpkin heads too...what's up with that?
You're half right, it's a Michael's DIY figure but it had a marshmallow shaped head...I just took that off and used a florist's pumpkin for the head.


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 Post subject: Re: Input please. Wicked Pumpkin Eater of Children
New postPosted: Tue Mar 26, 2013 10:36 am 
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the sculpt is top notch. From a personal point of view a tiny kid hung upside down from a tangled branch would add a great bit of humour


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 Post subject: Re: Input please. Wicked Pumpkin Eater of Children
New postPosted: Wed May 01, 2013 1:35 pm 
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I agree with Klang, maybe a kid hanging from one of the branches, and maybe even one trying to crawl away with bottom roots grabbing his leg..

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