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 Post subject: Zombie Apocalypse Survivor Series
New postPosted: Thu May 24, 2012 6:39 pm 

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This is my first time posting here looking to get some good feedback on how to improve esepcially in sculpting.....well and painting I wanna hear it all. Thanks for looking.

This is from a series a friend and I are creating. We are doing both Zombies and Survivors but this is the first completed. He's currently missing his bat in the pic but that shall be rectified soon.
Also sorry for no forward facing pic I'll have one up soonish.


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 Post subject: Re: Zombie Apocalypse Survivor Series
New postPosted: Fri May 25, 2012 3:55 pm 
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I think you could have downw ithout the headphones, but a little bit cleaner sculpt and it'd be a pretty cool project.

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 Post subject: Re: Zombie Apocalypse Survivor Series
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Thanks for the heads up. Yeah they started out just as a thought and by the time I got to the end of the sculpt I hadn't refined them anymore or figured out what I wanted to do with em. I will definitely keep that in mind for further sculpts often times less is more. I just get involved in a project and keep adding to it when I really should keep it as clean as possible. Lol working on that. Moving forward with this project I think they'll end up with a more basic sculpt concentrated on refining and cleaning up the sculpt using sanding tips from RustThisWorld.


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 Post subject: Re: Zombie Apocalypse Survivor Series
New postPosted: Sat May 26, 2012 7:53 am 
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I agree with hypnotiq. I think that part of it, for me, is the position of the headphones as well. They look too far forward. Other than that and refining the sculpting (and I think that just comes with experience -- I'm still working on it too) I like it. I like the mask, the hood, etc. I love the bloody handprint. Interested to see more of the series.

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 Post subject: Re: Zombie Apocalypse Survivor Series
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Lol thanks Infinite the bloody handprint is one of my fave parts as well. I think as this series moves forward you'll see a more well defined image of what we're shooting for


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